When Bethany finds her Master’s note, she expects it to contain
the usual set of instructions telling her how to prepare for their Friday
evening play session. But her Master asks for the unexpected—he wants her to be his Domme. Bethany is terrified at the prospect, but she doesn’t want to
disappoint Master. She’ll need to tap into her inner dominatrix if she’s to give
her newly submissive lover what he needs.
the usual set of instructions telling her how to prepare for their Friday
evening play session. But her Master asks for the unexpected—he wants her to be his Domme. Bethany is terrified at the prospect, but she doesn’t want to
disappoint Master. She’ll need to tap into her inner dominatrix if she’s to give
her newly submissive lover what he needs.
Heat Level: 4 Flames
4 Stars - Recommended Read!
Title: Master's Submission
Author: Helena Harker
Genre: BDSM
Publisher: Ellora's Cave
Short Story
Reviewed by Brandi
What happens when the Master turns the tables and wants his submissive to be his Domme? Well, I’m not going to tell you. I think you will need to read this lovely little short for yourself.
I thought the idea behind this story, being the switch in the power play roles, was a good one. The Master’s Submission is a well written BDSM short story, and as many short stories go, it is always hard to make a real solid connection to the characters, because many times, the reader needs more background to find that true connect with them. However, the author did a great job at painting a picture of the inner anxiety of Bethany as she works to find her inner dominatrix in hopes to please her master.
Short are difficult, because as a reader you want more, but I imagine the author is telling the “piece” of the story they want their readers to know about. I hate reading bad reviews based solely on the reasoning it was short, yet as a reviewer, how do I review it fairly? First, I can’t compare a short to a novel, so as a reader/reviewer I didn’t try. I asked these questions. Was the writing good? Did I enjoy this story? Did I want more of the story? Yes. Yes. And Yes. But wanting more means I was vested in this story enough that
wanting to read more can’t be considered a bad thing.
Master’s Submission was a fun, engaging, sexy read.
4 Stars - Recommended Read!
Title: Master's Submission
Author: Helena Harker
Genre: BDSM
Publisher: Ellora's Cave
Short Story
Reviewed by Brandi
What happens when the Master turns the tables and wants his submissive to be his Domme? Well, I’m not going to tell you. I think you will need to read this lovely little short for yourself.
I thought the idea behind this story, being the switch in the power play roles, was a good one. The Master’s Submission is a well written BDSM short story, and as many short stories go, it is always hard to make a real solid connection to the characters, because many times, the reader needs more background to find that true connect with them. However, the author did a great job at painting a picture of the inner anxiety of Bethany as she works to find her inner dominatrix in hopes to please her master.
Short are difficult, because as a reader you want more, but I imagine the author is telling the “piece” of the story they want their readers to know about. I hate reading bad reviews based solely on the reasoning it was short, yet as a reviewer, how do I review it fairly? First, I can’t compare a short to a novel, so as a reader/reviewer I didn’t try. I asked these questions. Was the writing good? Did I enjoy this story? Did I want more of the story? Yes. Yes. And Yes. But wanting more means I was vested in this story enough that
wanting to read more can’t be considered a bad thing.
Master’s Submission was a fun, engaging, sexy read.
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